i'll wait for you sittingFeed back on my poem?

I wrote this for my boyfriend but I'm too much of a chicken to give it to him without hearing what others think of it. It's my firs attempt at poetry so keep this in mind. So tell me what you think please. The poem is about my long distance relationship



I hope you’re doing well
I miss you every second, every minute, every hour, every day
Your scent now faded away
I wanted it to stay, I held on as hard as I could
But just like that it slipped away
I try to collect all the images and memories in my head, bring them back to life
I trace back every step we took together
The steps I so carefully observed
Yeah, I told you I never wanted to forget
And I didn’t and I won’t
It’s true my heart aches sometimes, it weeps, sometimes it even feels like it’s not there
But that’s just foolishness
It’s there, it’s here
It’s just a new heart now
A heart that includes you, the good, the bad
The memories and the future
Thi'll wait for you sittingey say we won’t make it, that you and I are wrong
Distance is not our friend, this will never work, we should just forget
But they don’t know, they don’t know
They can’t erase this, no one can
This isn’t a mistake, not something we can undo
Not a wrong turn
It’s so much more than they think it is
It’s a connection, it’s a bond
It’s our hearts and minds synched together
I believe they call it love
And I won’t lie, it hurts sometimes
But it’s not the end, it’s enough to keep our hearts apart
Because even when it sounds crazy, in reality you’re always here
You’re always here with me, I’ll always there with you
Indeed, we’re together and it’s great

And until I can stroke your soft thin hair
Until I can be hypnotized by those ocean-blue eyes again
I’ll sit here and wait, knowing you’re close
Not exactly here but not far away
Your love gives me hope
And it’s because of that power
That I know I can handle thii'll wait for you sittings and fight the dark hours
Slay the dragons and mutant creatures keeping me away from being completely with you
So it just wouldn’t make sense
I can’t give up now
I’ll fight and fight
I’ll wait and wait
And soon enough we’ll share a kiss again
i'm touched by yr poem. it reminds me of what it was like when i was in love... for other reasons, it wasn't easy for us too... and i thought he'd love me more for what we've been thru', but... well, tt's another story.
anyway, good luck to u. hope u find happiness.
that is so great! you should write a letter to him and write it really nicely on some nice paper. whatever you do don't sign it with a kiss...
I love this its very down to earth really shows deep emotions on how you feel about this relationship
Oh that's awesome. Kudos!!! Only thing is synched should be spelled cinched in line 27.
I wouldn't send it if I were you.